Is this a good transition sentence?

"… What made it worse was they were dropped off at the side of the highway, not at a bus stop. The lady who’s recruiting the talents was lecturing them that if they are not fit for the job, don’t see yourself that you’re fit for it and avoid joining the job.


When the bit actors arrived, they were told to find a place to rest but every area they find has been taken, they end up resting in the fields near the animals…"